Detailed coverage for your TV or film script
With over 15 years of screenwriting experience, I'll dig into your story structure, pacing, and plot, giving you advice on where to tighten things up, build more tension, and raise the stakes.
You'll get honest feedback on your characters: are they compelling? Do their goals and motivations ring true?
I'll also give you my take on your dialogue, whether it feels natural, moves the story forward, and avoids getting bogged down in exposition. I'll also point out specific scenes where you can pick up the pace and keep your audience hooked.